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Sacred Places
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Sacred Places |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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Sacred Places (A Tetractys) I'm sacred until I sacrifice all that keeps me aglow in darker moments. |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
and i bet you're not scared anymore!  nice write! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear muted, I've heard of teradactyls and triceratops, but I have never heard of "tetractys"! lol Thanks for adding to my store of poetic knowledge!  ~ Have a glorious day! EA |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Jurassic Poetry?....I've got one of them tetractys fossils...(hell, I am one I think)....whatever kinda "thinggie" this is...it's well done.....being the professional writer/poet that I am, I know all these things yanno?.....LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
muted Have to go along with Earth Angel on this one. Enjoyed the read. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
LOL...you guys make me smile! but just wanted to note...because i think J.Samm may have misread me...but it says "sacred" not "scared"....i just dont want the meaning to get confused... but you know what  im going to give ya a hug..because you were nice enough to comment to start with |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Profound and wise. I had to check that form Tetractys. It's interesting. Maybe one day I'll try. Thank you. Love, Margherita |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Tetractys look very interesting. Yours is most profound! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Nice |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love to watch learning in progress...thanks for sharing this lesson...maybe one day I will try this experimenting with new forms can be wonderful |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this form..I must look into it. This is wonderful! Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
I don't know what a tetractys is, but this is cool and very deep stuff that leaves me to thinking. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dawn, I also love this form. I need to learn a new one. I like this.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Nice words. It makes me want to shout!!!!!!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dawn~ Just look at you glow~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i tell ya, im havig too much fun with all these forms....cant wait to see what you all come up with! .....you will love it... |
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