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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2004-03-09 04:45 PM

Within it's day
We will surive,
No matter what?
No matter,
If tears comes out
at night
With it's time,
Life can be tough
Life can be rough,
To handle with care,
Within the song,
The song full of memories,
Full of words,
Full of songs,
Within it's way,
To find a path,
To your heart,
Let me stay tonight,
With you,
Let me take you,
Within it's light,
Stars so bright,
within it's path,
To find your love,
Love seems on it's path
A path to a road,
Where within love,
Within it's day,
stars seems so lost,
Tonight
Within it's time....
Time....

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

1 posted 2004-03-09 04:49 PM

Wow... very nicely done.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

2 posted 2004-03-09 04:52 PM

Super good work! Grover.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2004-03-09 05:13 PM

Very lovely dear vandana.
Within lies the treasure.
Love, Margherita

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

4 posted 2004-03-09 08:36 PM

flowed me through so easily...very lovely

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-03-09 08:37 PM

Excellent write Vandana!
Much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2004-03-14 04:48 PM

(big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, I truly believe the stars and clouds are written with our destinies and when they twinkle hey are responding to us all of promises, yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

7 posted 2004-03-14 04:50 PM

I liked it

Dave

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2004-03-14 05:48 PM

lovely thoughts~
*s
M

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2004-03-17 10:27 PM

A very beautiful heart song, vandana~

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