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Charisma
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0 posted 2004-03-09 01:01 PM



Time, mirror of life
Reflections of inner most
Smiles upon a tear
Thorns of bitterness, yet hope
Guide to eternally love


~*Theresia~*  

© Copyright 2004 Theresia A. Makatita-Poortman - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-03-09 01:16 PM


Charisma
Very nice, enjoyed the read.

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2 posted 2004-03-09 01:20 PM


This is beautiful, Charisma.
I enjoyed reading it.
Hugs  
Ethel

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3 posted 2004-03-09 01:24 PM


BRAVO! a wonderful write, Charisma!
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4 posted 2004-03-09 01:25 PM


Hope springs eternal! ~ and time heals all...

Love & Light,
EA

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5 posted 2004-03-09 11:50 PM


Lovely and wise writing!
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6 posted 2004-03-10 03:33 AM


good to see you
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7 posted 2004-03-10 08:43 AM


And that hope can guide through those thorns makes life always worth living! Enjoyed!
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8 posted 2004-03-10 09:57 AM


nice
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9 posted 2004-03-10 10:30 AM


Ah...Where there is hope...eternal love will follow...Beautiful writing...

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10 posted 2004-03-10 10:44 AM


nicely done... and nice to read you again.
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11 posted 2004-03-10 11:22 AM


Very nice....thanx for the read.

INclan

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12 posted 2004-03-10 08:44 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I wish for true love to always flitter like a happy butterfly in your heart, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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13 posted 2004-03-11 05:37 AM


Thank you all dear friends for your replies and for reading me

Charisma

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