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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Gone, like the cold, tap, tapping of Wind on screens of glass Gone, like the old, drip, dripping of the Closed water tap Trapped into obeisance with wooden clapboards strong Or shut off completely at the spigot’s main prong Gone, with hopes and dreams aplenty… Forever shattered Gone, with no recourse to reclaim… As if it never mattered Marrow-less bones of hurting solitude remain Leaving only distance, handling only pain |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
incredibly moving steavenr; a sad but well written piece; Sadie |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i feel this so deeply  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 to you Steavenr. Good poem, but so sad....hang in there. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Strong write...  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
steavenr~ you've written a beautiful ache here. So sadly~  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 sad stuff |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Write the second words The first cry out for them Dave |
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