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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Just another day where time blends and the whereabout of tomorrow shows no likelihood of being exposed. Tightness again gripping, making swallowing the future a starving proposition, though hunger pains remind me that I still am. M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Good write, enjoyed. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
yes, you are ~Still~ but, when the time comes you'll fly my friend |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
I agree with muted 
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, Maureen, tomorrow will come and perhaps, with it, a kinder day. Take care.  .....jo |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
The sun will always shine on the beautiful and compassionate...the sun will always shine on you M...nice poem...thank you.. Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
though hunger pains remind me that I still am. good to stay hungry isn't it? spring will come soon, imagaine the hunger pains the branchs are feeling right about now |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
expression well done...I relate to this |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
And still .... there comes growth and reaching, with every kitchen sink thrown in to keep the stillness in balance. I WASH MY HANDS OF IT!!! *S |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Blessed be the moment ... the Now. Even if it is hunger reminding you of it. Very good write. Love, Margherita  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
yes you are! and this is a wonderful poem - Paul |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
yes you still are good write M bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Spring is in the air and will soon fill your soul with renewal then you will hunger no more...**hugs** |
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