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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 2004-03-08 01:43 AM



I know you like the back of my hand,
familiar wrinkles that flourish my knuckles with sand
sunshine burnin' the surface away
This myst be a message of love.

Sunblocked by the ignorance in my selfish mind.
cloaked by the fear of rejection.
in my longing for you.
everytime i wander away..
it seems I fall back in your arms.

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-03-08 11:23 AM


good imagery for a sad scene, Kellie
hope all is OK

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
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2 posted 2004-03-08 11:48 AM


Sadly beautiful..

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
3 posted 2004-03-19 06:48 PM


Good insight... images!
Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2004-03-20 10:15 AM


sunshine burnin' the surface away
This must be a message of love.



No doubt!

Beautifully said.

Love, Margherita

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