Open Poetry #31 |
Another Hawk |
DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
With pleasure I joined her there And felt every movement of her hair And thus entwined We swooped and dived Spiralling side by side A pair of hawks With no wings Just magic Motion And words that sing |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
That was beautiful. ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sensual |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a high flying beautiful write |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
mmm, beautiful... ~K~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
'Aeriely' romantic |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Awesome job dave ...birds are magical and amazing little creatures JW |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
skyshine Thank you Dave passing shadows My pleasure Dave Midnitesun Thanks Dave Kahlil Too kind Dave steavenr Cheers dave aujussy wolf thanks Dave |
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