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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-03-07 08:56 PM


With pleasure I joined her there
And felt every movement of her hair
And thus entwined
We swooped and dived
Spiralling side by side
A pair of hawks
With no wings
Just magic
Motion
And words that sing


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1 posted 2004-03-07 08:58 PM


That was beautiful.

~sky

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Hold on, it gets better than you know....
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2 posted 2004-03-07 09:31 PM


very sensual
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3 posted 2004-03-07 09:59 PM


a high flying beautiful write
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4 posted 2004-03-07 10:01 PM


mmm, beautiful...
~K~

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5 posted 2004-03-07 10:24 PM


'Aeriely' romantic
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6 posted 2004-03-07 10:32 PM


Awesome job dave ...birds are magical and amazing little creatures

JW

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7 posted 2004-03-13 02:53 PM


skyshine

Thank you

Dave

passing shadows                

My pleasure

Dave


Midnitesun

Thanks

Dave

Kahlil

Too kind

Dave


steavenr

Cheers

dave

aujussy wolf

thanks

Dave

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