Open Poetry #31 |
Crystal Ball Tells All If You Are Willing To Answer |
EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
"step inside step inside past futures revealed money cheerfully refunded answer only a few questions Crystal Ball reveals all if..." So pounds pavement echoes swirling AllMansTime Plazas change curtains as Globe glass perchance even natural Enter your chance amusement silently bowing paying slightly guiltly The Fee whims blow with wind and who could possibly gauge that cost therein ENTER the garrish facade but you must pull/push aside curtains and actually show your face to the darkness save enshrined globe Questions questions more questions I did not pay a quarter/dracma/sixpence... to hear you ask of me questions I seek answers and fun- Silence bites off your tongue you listen perhaps first only time this time you paid your quarter cannot stop your ears nor move your tongue he/she speaks while your ears begin to bleed "And how is it thou closes the burgeoning portals of the ALL is thy mind actually so crowded" Crystal Ball spins yellow green blue blood red fitting too fitting you cringe "Ye seeker sullen joyous murderer kind oh not with blade nor stone cease thy pretense prognostative ye know impaling futures shard of nothingness" "Live Fear secret neath velvet veil no quilts sufficent ere be woven covering no threads per inch sufficent Nor escaping illumination might ever be henceforth called forth piercing" Crystal Ball spins blue purple drips blood red "An etching of tomorrow guilded red here now you parted the curtains daring redress forgiveness You for a single quarter would dare to face more than past all yesterdays tomorrows that you dare utter the words 'Half a Chance" Crystal Ball Tells All Ushered away with a glance Your quarter is cheerfully refunded Knowing the world knows you knowing you haven't half that chance you tried so to pay for The Crime Pay your quarter push back the curtains and find out for yourself If the Crystal Ball Truly Tells ALL Ask the madman screaming through the Midway/Carnival/Mystic Tent... "High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: I know someone, personally, who felt he needed to travel the circus. I hope he sees this. Time is unraveling. Well done, Sir. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...I have to keep this one to read over again |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
In crystal ball Is tomorrow seen? Holding in hope Through mystic dream. Dancing thought of mind Hazy swirls of mist, ‘Tis only yourself future in resist. Gaze the colors Truth be sought Reap the lessons Mystic ball wrought. |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
Thanks Gentle I do believe you grasped it all and added a touch of self to complete the enthrall Merci, to all |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Eternity's Horizons, I think I may have been in that exact tent before. How the circus does travel. Very deep. I'll have to search this out again sometime! Your writing continues to grow on me. Sadelite |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
Why thank you Sadelite One cannot help but notice your words shall I say dig deep And for myself, no offense to the often pictured bony fingered one (whom I trust is practicing his scales- chords and scales- are the basis of all musical understanding old friend) am glad to be released from that psuedonym- it just did not suit. perchance I shall write a bit of verse about how that came about some time. It might amuse. Thanks again, and keep on digging, "there's gold in them there words." "High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Consultation of the oracle determines nothing but if discernment lies within. So sayeth the witch. I do love this much. Absolutely enchanting. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
EternitysHorizon -- this is a very intriguing piece of good writing. I will read it many times! |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
Why thank you To have one scribblings read at all is a compliment, but that anyone might wish to peruse them more than once, is indeed, quite honestly humbling. Therefore humble thanks "High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy." |
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