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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
In the music of your words I can not speak of the fire between us I can not speak of the glory of raising our lives together to heaven I can not speak of knowing you If we did we would burn briefly If we do not we will burn forever |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
That's a very powerful ending.  ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i agree with skyshine! powerful  |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
well you definitely got the either or ending down Hope it is not the latter |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks Sky, Muted, Eternity It isn't a personal thing happening to me, I was down for the central heating years ago It came from something in when I priest went into a confession box and said forgive me father I have sinned. The priest not knowing a priest was on the other side said, what is your sin, my son. The other priest said, I have loved a woman. What sin is there in that the priest said. The other priest replied, I am a priest. Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! completely awesome |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
interesting and probably not the first time a priest has confessed to that M |
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