Open Poetry #31 |
Only Fingers |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
To reach... Without the arc of expectations. To be the biding faith of empty hands. In distance...space alone remains holy. And only fingers truly understand. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Some very powerful imagery here, multi-layered for certain, "To reach... Without the arc of expectations." Very good, even if it were a stand alone. "To be the biding faith of empty hands. In distance...space alone remains holy." Exquisite. Excellent skill! Grover. And only fingers truly understand. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
some very good things going on in this one...now to go back and peel the layers of meaning for my own enjoyment...great write... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc You have written another amazing poem! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Smiling... This is fantastic! You are so good at these. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Eric..yet one more for my library. Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
touch is all it takes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I don't know how you continue to do it |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
To reach ... and to trust that our fingers will gracefully touch upon truth Magical, dear Eric. I love you. Margherita |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Such a beautifully graphic description of longing itself... and the truth for which we are always reaching for... it's within the touch that the truth is known... only the fingers find such secrets. It's beautiful. Thank you for sharing with us your breathtaking gift of poetic love. I love you. Moca |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
cant say it better than everyone else already has..sooo..i'll just smile at you instead. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
And only fingers truly understand.'' ~ oh indeed and how beautifully said.... ~~**~~ |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Ericc Excelent poem... enjoyed ________ice ><> |
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