Open Poetry #31 |
Awakening |
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
* When long-buried dreams sprout anew and you know they will come true when snow and ice melt to the sun’s kiss and water drops gather jumping down the hills to play a brand new song echoing in your heart and you feel that you are part of the tune when the dead emerge from oblivion and bloom in your thoughts when blossoms are carried by the breeze to adorn your bed, when lilacs wrap you in their scent and you are ready to share in the sacred rite of creation when the skies witness your song of life and the star beams caress your face, when Universe rocks you in its womb and you will know the meaning of Home when Love shows you all the colors of the world and you tremble inside in awe then you know you are One with All. When finally Spring has expanded with all its power of renewal within you then the awakening has taken place. Then you are Love Then … you ARE... LOVE. * |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Margherita~ I just sat here *sighing* at the beauty of your words (through three reads now) ... and that picture is to just shout HAPPY for !!! Such a rich awakening of lovely thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Yes then you are love. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Margherita, this write is so lovely and full of hope and renewal. I love spring (inside and out)! Keeping this one. ~K~ |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
And only one who knows could write with such beauty and sureness. Love, Eric |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Very nice Liked it a lot Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! splendid write! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
my heart strings pulled right along with this! gorgeous write |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
What a beautifully illustrated ray of hope for Spring! Your photo was breath-taking. What type of flower is it and where is it native? Is that hyacinth? This captured me: when snow and ice melt to the sun’s kiss and water drops gather jumping down the hills to play a brand new song echoing in your heart and you feel that you are part of the tune Thanks for your continued positive outlook on things. I enjoy reading your poetry and the kind responses you've given mine. Take care, Margherita. Sadelite |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Such a wondrous and beautiful writing, and that image! ....~P |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just lovely and going into my libaray! hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Margherita -- I believe this was a truly inspired piece of art! So beautiful, it brought a tear to my eye, no kidding. ....jo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you from my heart dear poet friends for your loving comments. Dear Sadelite, the flower is the lilac - a close-up -, one of my favorite flowers as we had them in the garden when I was a child in Switzerland. I love their scent, there are also white lilacs. Love, Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Such fine writing and so very delicate, each word seemed to float on it's own. Loved the ending especially. So pretty Margherita~ Hugs~ |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Margherita...the words of beauty and love you wrote here just simply tumbled off the tongue..and left behind such imagery...brilliant write... Thank you... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Margherita, YOU ARE LOVE!!! ~ and you reached out and touched me. I felt a sense of coming "Home" as I read your lovely tribute to the coming Spring! Love & Light, Linda |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
awe-inspiring! nice form and style, the words were well-chosen too. |
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