Open Poetry #31 |
Song of Tom Bombadil - for the Tolkien fans |
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I sing in the morning “with hi and go derry” I dance neath the moon with the woods as my home All I survey, I am lord of and merry My kingdom is treetops - I choose not to roam Born in the morning “with hi and go derry” I name all the creatures and call them on down I know of each planting of root nut and berry My cap bears a feather my head wears a crown I live in my barrow “with hi and go derry” My forest dominion is all I desire I've named all the creatures the elf, dwarf and faerie At night time my comfort is given by fire I dance through this midland “with hi and go derry” My coming and going is never quite done In majesty born to the green of this scenery I stay till the kingdom of mankind is won I'm Tom of the morning “with hi and go derry” I'll dance through the world till the last age has come Then with the halflings I'll ride on the ferry To take us e'er onward right up to the sun. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kethry Very good, I'd like to hear you sing that. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
A joly good read , JRR is a legend in writing |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Nice job, Lynne...much enjoyed! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
now you'll have me singing this all day long! what delightful treat to find this morning! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth beloved one I can only say wow, this is truly spectacular writing, absolutely outstandingly beautifully presented and truly a song JRR would have been proud to call his own. Why is it, do you think, that whenever there is great writing here it has your name appended to it? Is it that you have unquestionable quality, is it that when you form a piece it is so totally complete so wonderful that all else pales into insignificance? Whatever the reason your writing ensures that this place will always be worth a visit, if only to read your sparkling gems of wonder. You do know I love this don’t you? Good, I really and truly do, it is splendiferous in the extreme. and forever Slushy Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is capturing the more light hearted moments of Tolkien's requiem...very, very enchanting, Kethry! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'm feeling so merry with your "hi and go derry"! Skip to my lou my darlin'! EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, my friend... thank you for this tune for my afternoon. *S* |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awwwwwww Kethry what a song......can hear you singing, and what a song Tom Bombadil would love it. (((hugs))) Charisma |
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