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Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

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0 posted 2004-03-06 09:57 AM

                 I know
               there are angels and people
       given us
     to
Fill, to feel
the cracks
    of partial reflection
        lost in a sprinkled ripple
           of dusking  pond.
                                  I know of dreams
                                      bizarre in nature
                                         that take us
                                           beyond
                                                earthly bounds
                                                enlightening us
                                               to sounds and
                                             breath
                                         never met.
                                       I know
                                     of these.
                                  They are
                                REAL.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-03-06 10:07 AM

Sadelite
As real as a dream can be.

muted

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since 2004-01-15

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-03-06 10:09 AM

nicely done

this is lovely

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

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3 posted 2004-03-06 10:10 AM

Sy,
I bet we could write a book about them.
I'd love to hear yours.
Sadie

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

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4 posted 2004-03-06 10:14 AM

Thank you, muted.  It was inspired by something someone here wrote me.  I re-read your poem this morning and was thinking about you.  I hope you could feel a warm presence at that time.  I'm sure there are a lot of warm thoughts being sent your way by others here.
                Take care,
              Sadie

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

5 posted 2004-03-06 10:16 AM

Very nice write Sadie..like the pattern..LOL..

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

6 posted 2004-03-06 01:30 PM

I know they are too

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2004-03-06 01:44 PM

... lost in a sprinkled ripple
of dusking pond.

It feels so good to know, doesn't it?!
What a precious gift they are and how very beautifully did you express your thoughts!
Deeply enjoyed.
Love and hugs. Margherita

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2004-03-07 04:05 PM

Such a pretty presentation Sadie.
The art of the mind touches pen to paper so well in your write.
TD

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2004-03-07 04:16 PM

lovely and true...

~smiling~
M

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

10 posted 2004-03-07 10:55 PM

Yes, I think you do. This was really poetic and lovely, C. .........hugs, jo

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

11 posted 2004-03-08 06:48 PM

This is so beautiful...... and yes, there are such things. There are indeed such things as these.

Bless you for this.

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Grover
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since 2004-01-27

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London, ON, Canada

12 posted 2004-03-08 07:09 PM

So very nice, smooth flowing, wonderful diction! Good work! Grover.

EternitysHorizon
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Twilight's Orchestra

13 posted 2004-03-08 07:55 PM

pass thy dream
might contain
inspirational spark
the lights night to ever sight

LOVE the format
well done

"High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy."

Sadelite
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14 posted 2004-03-08 10:13 PM

Thank you to all!  I appreciated each one of your comments very much.  Have a great week!

           Sadie

suthern

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15 posted 2004-03-09 09:46 AM

There are indeed... *S*

This is stunning, Sadelite... beautiful words and presentation! *S*

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

16 posted 2004-03-09 11:54 AM

...and your words are "REAL". This was beautiful in form and content!

Love & Light,
EA

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

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17 posted 2004-03-09 07:54 PM

you do very well with this Sadie - real is what we experience and you say well an experience - paul

Martie

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18 posted 2004-03-09 08:36 PM

Sadelite

I know these too, but you have said it so beautifully perfect. Thank you!

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