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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-03-06 05:32 AM


Green sage under tangled trees.]
Glades of wild leaves, roots and stems, flowers with bee's.]

Earthy smells rise from underfoot, brambles rip skin.]
Walking deep in thought, a day dream i am in.]

Falling in my mind, i fade to an Emerald reverie.]
A veil has been lifted from my eyes, now i can see the realm of the Fairie.]

Beautiful people ringed with shimmering silver, passing in procession.]
Clothing with colours so pleasing to the eye.Horses with whistles in their mane's sound with the blowing wind, makes a big impression.]

Delightful and immortal, ageless, happy and worry free.]
Women with hair black as jet, streaming over shoulders, a pleasure to see.]

Men strong and bold, proudly walking without a care, full of magical courage.]
Primeval and stealthy, descended from a race from aeons of yesteryear,from a different race in time, a different age.]

Untainted, pure of spirit, mind and soul, wonderfully free.]
The veil falls back across my eyes, back again in my world, just me.]

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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1 posted 2004-03-06 05:35 AM


oh my, this is absolutely beautiful, how vivid your daydreams are!
but even if reality is not as magickal, its only because you arent looking hard enough
its there inside of you, resting, until you discover it.

this poem is wonderful

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2 posted 2004-03-06 05:45 AM


Untainted, pure of spirit, mind and soul, wonderfully free~~~~
my goal

very nice, Phil
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3 posted 2004-03-06 05:47 AM


This poem started from the first lines ''Green sage''..i didnt even know where it was going.... i just laid down and listened to music...and it just flowed from within me...yes i can see that there is magikal things in life to see..none more than you my dear...

Thank you for your very kind words Dawn...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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4 posted 2004-03-06 05:49 AM


Thank you so much for your kind words too Maureen....much appreciated....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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5 posted 2004-03-06 01:36 PM


oh, how you are growing *big smile*
Enchantress
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6 posted 2004-03-06 01:40 PM


Wonderful magical write Phil!
And, it is not just a dream..
for if you really believe...
tis there!
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

Suetang
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7 posted 2004-03-06 03:40 PM


Wow, Phil!

Your words took me on a magical journey.  This was absolutely beautiful and so very much enjoyed.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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8 posted 2004-03-08 04:47 AM


Dix..glad i could make you smile..thank you..GR....

Nancy..i believe there are things of magic all around..thank you for your kind words..GR...

Sue..i am very pleased i took you on a magical journey..and that you enjoyed..excellant picture as usual..thank you..GR...

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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