Open Poetry #31 |
laughter singing spring |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
the weatherman engaged his smile. "Yes," I thought. "Oh yes indeed" crossing legs and dotting "t"'s brushing feathers from my face delighting in the tingling of my nails in skate of scalp... of sweat in birth of me languid icing my own neck I can smell the musk of self and hold-me-tight luscious lick-my-finger-pout tonight the breeze feels like a shout |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh this is sultry...ah, those balmy nights, indoors and out! loved this |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, send it up here...we're still nipping our noses with frosty thoughts of roses...it's 33 degrees! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
serenity, You amaze me! Where on earth do you come up with all this imagery for one poem? I'm envious!!! Have a great weekend! Sadie |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
It's 'pea-soup' balmy out tonight!" the weatherman engaged his smile. "Yes," I thought. "Oh yes indeed" ooooh ya!! Love those balmy thoughts of yours Karen. Reminds me of ummmm...oh, what was that movie?..... Summer and Smoke? I think that's it. Only this is Springtime and Sizzle. hugs to you, Chris |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yup..what my sister said... You sizzle in the spring Karen. Excellent upbeat write. Love ya lady~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, For whom the bells toll. LOL |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity Taken there with your remarkable words. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Seems a bit humid. Steamy, some would say. Almost missed this'n Ahhhh, Spring. Ain't it grand... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
tonight the breeze feels like a shout Indeed it does! Fantastic K....absolutely. M Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
singing spring indeed.......thank you so much for sharing your wonderful thoughts Charisma |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*grin*...What wonderfully descriptive words you write...A joy to read... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you know me baby..Im moth giddy for that bayou humidity. LOVE the imagery and word play in this girlie. Through the water ... through the rain ... to the soul of everything |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I could use some of that 'be balmy' stuff today LOL, enjoyed the temp change reading this |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
definitely sultry and filled with drama very you |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Liked it Nice dave |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
well I will be honest....I miss the south, and this spring song just makes me ache to return .... lovely this....and such vivid images came to mind....thank ya ~~**~~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thank you I think i'll just hum the tune tonight tho.... yer all so lovely for reading. (and it felt like that--it really did. ) |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I will have some of what she is having!!! "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
looking for my lost shaker of salt some people claim that theres a ... oh damn you know what I mean... :smooch: |
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