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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-03-05 06:51 PM



Trusting someone's idea of magnifying their inner desires
Calculated destruction of a belief that would obey

Exploding from the middle to build a beginning and end
Blaming the victim
As an easy target
To fool

No-one

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Startime55
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1 posted 2004-03-05 06:55 PM


Making one think seems to flow through this poem....how often do we succumb to these simple things....makes me pleased that over the years I have learned not to judge....I like the way your work makes me look within myself...well done...

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-03-05 08:00 PM


Making one think seems to flow through this poem....how often do we succumb to these simple things....makes me pleased that over the years I have learned not to judge....I like the way your work makes me look within myself...well done...

I came back to read this and it was if it had been written by a stranger.

Yes all of my poems are my thinking and trying to say there is knowledge in the world and most of our minds, are in suitcases, carried from property to protery.

Bigotry thinks backwards but I dont subscribe to the ideal that killing people can be written off as, it happened yesterday - let's move forward, or using it because no one will touch it, if you dont.

Every political adviser with a weak person, has a war, but it has to be a war that allows memories to fail, whilst not allowing the processions and gallentry to fail but before the hospitals have to report.

I'll stop here.

regards

Dave

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