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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2004-03-05 06:20 PM

"Fire in the hole!"
"Fire in the hole!"

caught up in a nightmare,
thinking I was a merchant ship
far out upon the deep blue sea...

when suddenly the dang engine room was on fire,
and all hands were on my deck...

why was this happening to me?

I was tossing and turning,
riding the crest
of dark tempestuous seas...

but at the last moment I fell to my knees,
woke up to find myself
on the bedroom floor,
crying

"HELP!
Will someone please call a fireman to hose me off?"

Then YOU appeared
with your custom hose
and put that fire
under control,
but not completely out.

*

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2004-03-05 06:27 PM

regards
sudhir

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2004-03-05 07:20 PM

Under control is good....some flames we don't want to be put out....I really like this one...

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

3 posted 2004-03-05 08:29 PM

This read so easily and quickly--nicely done!
Sadelite

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2004-03-05 08:38 PM

(giggles) This is so wonderfully written, sweet friend, there's one place where the fire must always burn on and that is within, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2004-03-06 12:23 PM

oh my!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2004-03-06 12:28 PM

LOL, hope you each enjoyed this lighthearted write.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-03-07 06:44 PM

I did enjoy

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

8 posted 2004-03-07 06:52 PM

Interesting conclusion. A nice twist! Grover.

INclan
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since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

9 posted 2004-03-07 07:00 PM

We firemen are a versitile lot...enjoyed the read.

INclan

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2004-03-07 07:05 PM

for your replies

happy to have a chance to bring you a grin

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