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Mindless Thoughts |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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did you ever stop to think why i do the things i do why i laugh at your jokes why i'm always there for you did you ever think that maybe just maybe there might be a reason my heart screams i love you but you just walk by with nothing more than a smile when we're talking i can only hear my heart pounding pounding so loud so loud are you saying something? i'll just smile smile does it even matter if i know what your saying its always about her her why not just break my heart right now its better than this feeling gut-wrentching finger-twisting needles-in-the-spine pain pain but in the end life is a road and you can't just stop because of a flat tire i'll just keep driving keep my eyes on the horizon because thats all that matters the furture. |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
needles in the spine...i'm not a stranger to the feeling... you brought it out well. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Drives home the importance of expressing emotion. Very well delivered. Frank. Honest. Good job. Grover. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Chelsea, this is wonderful, sweet friend, this made me smile as you look to the future and find that morning star shining to you, twinkling that a promise will be fulfilled and you will be blessed! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chelsea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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