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dingusjr
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0 posted 2004-03-05 02:48 PM



She told the officer
She was too pretty to be arrested,
But she was anyway.
Too pretty to see the judge,
Too pretty for probation.

No shrinking violet, this girl,
She was too pretty to pass a drug test.
She stood ultra close
To her male Probation Officer
Giving him free looks
So he could fully appreciate
How pretty she was.

She worked in a strip club for tips
And asked to work as an escort
So she could pay court costs.
This girl was just too pretty.
Much too pretty
For the needle marks on her arm.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-03-05 02:51 PM



Isn't it strange...
how the prettiest ones
seemingly, sometimes,
have no self-respect?

You drew this out
very well, Larry.

dingusjr
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2 posted 2004-03-05 02:53 PM


Yes, everyone might as well know I am a Probation-Parole Officer in Missouri.  This is
about several young ladies on my caseload....
and yes, I am the male officer offered the free looks.

Martie
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3 posted 2004-03-05 02:58 PM


Larry...Society puts so much value in how someone looks, that many young girls think that looks will buy happiness.  It takes some hard lessons, like the one in your poem, to help them.  I admire you for the work you do...as well as the sensitivity of this poem.  
Grover
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4 posted 2004-03-05 04:48 PM


We are all sinful by nature; some of us make very bad choices. Often this type of behaviour appears to be an easy lot in life, but in fact it is much more difficult than living and working in "Mainstream America"-- or Canada (in my case). I grew up with one such girl. She died from an overdose many years ago. I was an addict as well (we often shared the same needle)-- but for the grace of God there go I. I've been clean for 24 years. I believe you serve in an invaluable role and although you may actually never see anyone "straighten out" as a direct result of being on parole/probation you nevertheless can have a tangible impact on them in the long run. Even though it was years after I was on parole that I finally "got out" I can look back and see I was helped by my PO. Thanks for sharing with us! Grover.
dingusjr
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5 posted 2004-03-05 06:16 PM


My hats off to you, Grover...I thank you for
the inspiration you share...and the thought that I may be making more of change in people than I realize.

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6 posted 2004-03-05 09:37 PM


The work you do is so important, Larry... so is this poem. *S* It has such impact... an excellent portrait!
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