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Sand of Time
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Sand of Time |
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PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
We walk alone the sand of time, as I close my eyes and envision, the inevitable crime, of my heated lover's heart. A gentle bead of sweat rolls down my brow, and the invigorating taste of salt fills my senses, as my lover's heart breaks her vow, with an exquisite suitor. Her stare is but the Gulf of Mexico, beautiful- just before the waning sun meets horizon. Eyes radiating like a distant light house- iredescently aglow, like a distant constelation of stars. Her soft touch carresses my body, as her hair whips about, striking like a whip against my nude body, and across my well-worn face. Our bodies are silhouetted, 'gainst the canvas of the sea, as love requited, is expressed through thee. We stand there dignified in the nude, bound only by the hands of time, We happily embrace the romantic mood, as we silently exchange goodbyes. Passion overwhelms thee, as the sand of time is washed away, by the relentless unforgiving sea, that truley gives breath to thee. |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
That was beautiful....I love the scene in it.  ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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Iron Wolf Junior Member
since 2004-01-20
Posts 23 |
bound only by the hands of time, I really liked that line. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 this is very inspiring...  Greeneyes~ I lie awake at night |
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