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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-03-04 11:48 PM


Free To Be Love


I hold onto love
and I begin to
believe that love
belongs to me.

But love is not
free to be love
until it has
been set free.


JamesLee
March04
2004

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EternitysHorizon
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since 2002-05-03
Posts 145
Twilight's Orchestra
1 posted 2004-03-05 12:11 PM


Love and Freedom bound
each strenghtens the other

nice write

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

2 posted 2004-03-05 01:05 AM


how so very true...much like that which one wishes to hold on to must be held in an open hand...well done...simple, powerful, and sage-filled write
Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2004-03-05 04:45 AM


You have set it free .... you are Love.
Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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4 posted 2004-03-05 06:14 PM


Thank you Eternity, steavenr and Margherita for the nice responses...James
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