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Startime55
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0 posted 2004-03-04 02:00 PM



Beauty Revealed

With the fogs lifting there’s beauty revealed
as sunlight shines upon nature’s diamonds
Trees still bare as they await the spring
are shimmering with crystalline hoar frost

Rainbows dancing in warm reflection
on the millions of ice painted limbs
A forest of white to leave us in awe
of the wondrous art too soon to vanish

Magic will flow in the soul that can see
this creative landscape endeavour
A renowned painter could never recapture
perfection of The Master Creator

Quickly the warmth of the sun will reclaim
all the beauty now displayed before us
As water droplets diamonds dissolve
with memory of morning’s delight

Startime



© Copyright 2004 Karen Mc Neil-Tomayer - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-03-04 02:28 PM



Welcome home...
and well done!

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2004-03-04 03:13 PM


StarTimeSis~
So nice to see you here~

And your words carry the soft beauty of your thoughts still~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Margherita
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3 posted 2004-03-04 05:31 PM


Beautiful images.
You captured the magic of this special time.
Love, Margherita

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-03-04 06:06 PM


Welcome home dear lady!!
You, and your words have been missed...
and this piece is no exception!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~
            

Martie
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5 posted 2004-03-04 07:28 PM


So good to see you!  This is lovely.  
Suetang
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6 posted 2004-03-04 08:17 PM


Startime

Your words of wonder and beauty have been missed and it is so lovely to see you grace these pages once more.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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Gaia
7 posted 2004-03-04 08:24 PM


as always, your words flow with grace down this blue screen
welcome home, lady

passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-03-05 03:42 AM


what a beautiful painting you've done!
Goldenrose
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9 posted 2004-03-05 06:51 AM


Startime...this is a fantastic poem of nature and the beauty of frost and ice..i love winter..my favourite time of year...

''a renowned painter could never recapture perfection of the master creator''...

Very evocative words here..thank you for the imagery...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

ethome
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10 posted 2004-03-05 07:42 AM


Gorgeous metaphors....I see you're still writing with such a beautiful heart!

Eric

Kicking Kim
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11 posted 2004-03-05 08:31 AM


What a lovely poem.  It is nice to have you back, and this is one hell of a comeback poem.  Good write.



^*Kimberley*^

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Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2004-03-05 08:38 AM


Is it true, is it really you.  YOU have been so missed lady!  HUGS.  Reading your words again is such a treat for us!
Next time dont stay away so long ya hear!  Hugs

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2004-03-05 06:34 PM


Lovely...James
Sudhir Iyer
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14 posted 2004-03-05 06:57 PM


abundant in beauty, this is ...

regards
sudhir

Sadelite
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15 posted 2004-03-05 08:34 PM


A sparkling and delightful poem-much enjoyed.

Magic will flow in the soul that can see
this creative landscape endeavour
A renowned painter could never recapture
perfection of The Master Creator

The magic flowed not only from His, but through yours.  This was a marvelous little gift we received!  Thank you!!!

          Sadelite

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16 posted 2004-03-05 08:46 PM




(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully wondrous, sweet friend, He is indeed the ultimate painter and made all of the blessings we breathe and witness possible, God Bless You, I'm so happy to see your poetry again, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

mutington
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17 posted 2004-03-05 11:31 PM


It's so nice to read your wonderful poetry once again....

SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!

Joyce O'Neal
[mutington]

"I can live by myself, but not within myself."
MUTINGTON'S  MEADOWS



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