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Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

0 posted 2004-03-04 01:32 PM

If loving you
was illegal
I'd be a fugitive
from the law
I'd change my
name and address
Every hard earned penny
I would withdraw
I'd learn how to
jump onto boxcars
Ride the rails
from dusk till dawn
I'd slyly barter
for my supper
If need be -
my rings I'd pawn
If loving you
meant jail time
I'd probably
get life
Imprisoned willingly
right beside you -
Committed husband
and faithful wife.
.
.

Chris Barker
~2002~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-03-04 01:34 PM

I'm so pleased to see you bring this one back up Chris!!
One of my very best favourites!

~Hugs, love and miss ya, Teed~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-03-04 01:40 PM

Well hello Bonnie! LOL...where's Clyde these days? *chuckling*...I'm sorry Chris, but that is immediately where my mind went, Bonnie & Clyde, the fugitives, notorious lovers of a way to beat the system...just don't end up like them, ok?

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2004-03-04 02:01 PM

Thankyou NancyLee.

Karilea - Glad you enjoyed. lol.

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2004-03-04 02:06 PM

BRAVO!!!!What a wonderful and creative way of expressing love....I love it...

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2004-03-04 04:38 PM

Love causes so many things, doesn't it.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2004-03-04 04:39 PM

Startime & Sue, many thanks.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2004-03-04 11:27 PM

Nice writing...James

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

8 posted 2004-03-05 07:11 AM

Chris this poem is brilliant..it shows the depth and magnitude of your love...thank you for sharing it with us...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

9 posted 2004-03-05 07:36 AM

Lovely metaphors and real warmth to this piece.....Good work!

Eric

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

10 posted 2004-03-05 10:18 AM

James, Phil, and Eric - thankyou poets three! hugs!!

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

11 posted 2004-03-07 07:43 PM

I enjoyed this poem very much Chris. I'm sorry I didn't sign it sooner. I lost track of it but I did search it out.

believe in what your heart feels...

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

12 posted 2004-03-07 08:13 PM

Glad Scorpio found this...I missed you too, but glad I got the chance to read.
Sensational.
TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2004-03-07 08:22 PM

sweet write

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

14 posted 2004-03-07 08:38 PM

Awww what a nice surprise to see my little write back up here again. Thankyou all.

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