Open Poetry #31 |
That something |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
At times does something take you past what normal day does bring Which lifts you to the height of joy and makes you want to sing When Goosebumps tease your body so you feel so much alive Way past the normal realms of wake where heart and soul revive When angels sing with lifting love and offer heavens taste When something in you dances free and nothing turns to waste A time that’s saved, a special gift as lovers caught embrace Turning all the senses high and moment into grace [This message has been edited by Rick (03-05-2004 06:26 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Rick I see you are in a moment of grace! How exquisite and uplifting is your poem! I’ll keep it. Love, Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rick A delight to read, enjoyed. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
very much enjoyed |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
A moment reading your poems are like that special place in your write...it is indeed intoxicating...free just to be alive! Rick, this is written by a warm heart that understands the true value of each moment. You do possess a sense of being! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
How wonderful. I love it. -JUju |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Rick I have experienced 'that something' and it is a wonderful feeling. Once again your words speak for me. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
not in along time...but maybe again soon delightful write |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Margherita, thank you so much for your reply, there is a song that brings me that something, called Unchained melody. I am sure that you have heard it before, I don't know the singers name but it is just great and very uplifting. great to see you here my friend. Seymour, thank you, always good to see you reply, words to describe feelings and friends to share them with. muted, thank you for your reply again appreciated my friend. Dear Lee, a wonderful complement you offer, thank you my friend, it is so nice to share with people as yourself the passion of oneself, your words are always so much appreciated. Juju, I am so glad that you love it, thank you for sharing your thoughts my friend. Dear Sue, your words always speak to me with kindness, thank you for sharing and visiting my friend, be well and take care. Dear Dixie, at times we need to let ourselves go and just enjoy, thanks for the reply my friend, I hope it comes to you soon. Take care and may you be lucky in love. To you all again my friends, thank you, you are all wonderful and it is a pleasure to share my thoughts and feelings with you all. Take care and my you all stay well. Sincerely Rick |
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