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Rick
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0 posted 2004-03-04 07:02 AM


At times does something take you past what normal day does bring
Which lifts you to the height of joy and makes you want to sing
When Goosebumps tease your body so you feel so much alive
Way past the normal realms of wake where heart and soul revive

When angels sing with lifting love and offer heavens taste
When something in you dances free and nothing turns to waste
A time that’s saved, a special gift as lovers caught embrace
Turning all the senses high and moment into grace

[This message has been edited by Rick (03-05-2004 06:26 AM).]

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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-03-04 07:26 AM


Dear Rick I see you are in a moment of grace! How exquisite and uplifting is your poem!
I’ll keep it.
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-03-04 07:38 AM


Rick
A delight to read, enjoyed.

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3 posted 2004-03-04 08:34 AM


very much enjoyed
LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-03-04 08:41 AM


A moment reading your poems are like that special place in your write...it is indeed intoxicating...free
just to be alive!
Rick, this is written by a warm heart that understands the true value of each moment.  You do possess a sense of being!

Juju
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5 posted 2004-03-04 07:47 PM


How wonderful.
I love it.

-JUju

Suetang
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6 posted 2004-03-04 08:14 PM


Hello Rick

I have experienced 'that something' and it is a wonderful feeling.  Once again your words speak for me.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-03-05 03:37 AM


not in along time...but maybe again soon

delightful write

Rick
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8 posted 2004-03-05 06:39 AM


Dear Margherita, thank you so much for your reply, there is a song that brings me that
something, called Unchained melody. I am sure that you have heard it before, I don't know the singers name but it is just great and very uplifting. great to see you here my friend.

Seymour, thank you, always good to see you reply, words to describe feelings and friends to share them with.

muted, thank you for your reply again appreciated my friend.

Dear Lee, a wonderful complement you offer, thank you my friend, it is so nice to share with people as yourself the passion of oneself, your words are always so much appreciated.

Juju, I am so glad that you love it, thank you for sharing your thoughts my friend.

Dear Sue, your words always speak to me with kindness, thank you for sharing and visiting my friend, be well and take care.

Dear Dixie, at times we need to let ourselves go and just enjoy, thanks for the reply my friend, I hope it comes to you soon. Take care and may you be lucky in love.

To you all again my friends, thank you, you are all wonderful and it is a pleasure to share my thoughts and feelings with you all. Take care and my you all stay well.

Sincerely
Rick

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