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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-03-04 05:10 AM


Wandering, wandering in my mind, your memorable smiling face beams and i go into my world of dreams.

How i would take your tousled hair from your face, kiss your lips, look into your eyes so bright, sparkling like crystal clear streams.

Now your face i see before i lay me down to sleep.
Strong deep love, for you in my heart i would keep.
What wonderful love, overflowing, welling up with passion and emotion.

Dawn day dreamily rises from cerise and azure skies.
On the day you resolve to share my love, you will i swear see nought but pride, love and everlasting devotion.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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muted
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1 posted 2004-03-04 05:15 AM


this is very pretty
"cerise and azure skies" sounds so vivid and lush...which is the way love makes you look at things!

again, a very romantic write from a gentle soul...

Goldenrose
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2 posted 2004-03-04 05:22 AM


Thank you again Muted..you are definately making my day...but then a poet does need his muse.... does he not?...

Thank You....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2004-03-04 06:03 AM


very romantic, Phil...enjoyable to read first thing in the morning

*s
M

Goldenrose
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4 posted 2004-03-04 06:33 AM


Thank Maureen..so glad to have brought you some cheer this morning...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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