Open Poetry #31 |
Come Fill My Heart |
Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Come fill my heart with love, so sweet and tender. Enter my world, my soul, i promise to surrender. Let us speak words so gentle and kind. Set our hearts free, soothe the inner being, let loose the mind. Golden amber days of beauty. Sung with songs of birds, mellifluous and fruity. Sweet soft subtle scents so strong. Kisses in wild woodlands, with sun shadows so long. Life without care or worry,free as the white dove.Caresses as soft as the spring rain. Love breathed with life, renewed everyday, again and again. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
gentle and romantic, and such a nice scene..woodlands, soft rain...sounds like a very nice place indeed! you wear your heart so well |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Thank you very much Muted for your kind and encouraging reply...it has made me very happy.... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A beautiful romantic write! *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully written, thought and expressed. Lovely poetry....Good morning! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful...so very romantic! Hugs~
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Romantic and filled with the yearnings of Spring... |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Great write! You brighten my day! Thanks. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful piece |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Suthern...Thank you for your kind comments.. GR. LeeJ...thank you for your encouragement.. GR. Nancy..hugs back to you..thank you... GR. Startime...Thank you for your kind words.. GR Kristabell...glad i could brighten your day..thank you. GR Dixie... Thank you for your kind words... GR ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Phil Your words were so very beautiful and so uplifting. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This brought to mind a new garden... Nice write Phil. Eternal spring. TD |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
I really love nature themed love poems since love should be as natural as the coming of spring... nicely written |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Sue ..thank you for your kind words...GR... Vandana...Glad you enjoyed thank you....GR.... Diamond..a new garden, anything with nature i love..thank you..GR... Sea..we share a love of nature ...thank you...GR.... ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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