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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-03-04 05:02 AM


Come fill my heart with love, so sweet and tender.
Enter my world, my soul, i promise to surrender.

Let us speak words so gentle and kind.
Set our hearts free, soothe the inner being, let loose the mind.

Golden amber days of beauty.
Sung with songs of birds, mellifluous and fruity.

Sweet soft subtle scents so strong.
Kisses in wild woodlands, with sun shadows so long.

Life without care or worry,free as the white dove.Caresses as soft as the spring rain.
Love breathed with life, renewed everyday, again and again.


''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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1 posted 2004-03-04 05:06 AM


gentle and romantic, and such a nice scene..woodlands, soft rain...sounds like a very nice place indeed!
you wear your heart so well

Goldenrose
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2 posted 2004-03-04 05:13 AM


Thank you very much Muted for your kind and encouraging reply...it has made me very happy....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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3 posted 2004-03-04 10:19 AM


A beautiful romantic write! *S*
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4 posted 2004-03-04 10:50 AM


beautifully written, thought and expressed.
Lovely poetry....Good morning!

Enchantress
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5 posted 2004-03-04 11:04 AM


Wonderful...so very romantic!
Hugs~


~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~
            

Startime55
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6 posted 2004-03-04 11:48 AM


Romantic and filled with the yearnings of Spring...

Kristabell
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7 posted 2004-03-04 12:08 PM


Great write! You brighten my day! Thanks.
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8 posted 2004-03-05 03:24 AM


wonderful piece
Goldenrose
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9 posted 2004-03-05 05:22 AM


Suthern...Thank you for your kind comments..

GR.

LeeJ...thank you for your encouragement..

GR.

Nancy..hugs back to you..thank you...

GR.

Startime...Thank you for your kind words..

GR

Kristabell...glad i could brighten your day..thank you.

GR

Dixie... Thank you for your kind words...

GR


''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Suetang
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10 posted 2004-03-06 03:56 PM


Hello Phil

Your words were so very beautiful and so uplifting.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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11 posted 2004-03-06 07:25 PM


enjoyed
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12 posted 2004-03-06 07:30 PM


This brought to mind a new garden...
Nice write Phil.  Eternal spring.
TD

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13 posted 2004-03-06 07:59 PM


I really love nature themed love poems since love should be as natural as the coming of spring... nicely written
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14 posted 2004-03-08 04:31 AM


Sue ..thank you for your kind words...GR...

Vandana...Glad you enjoyed thank you....GR....

Diamond..a new garden, anything with nature i love..thank you..GR...

Sea..we share a love of nature ...thank you...GR....

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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