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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Gates fly open, stone walls crumble both entrance and exit Facing infinity- in all direction; swirling thoughts fall away, words shattered to smithereens darkness pierced... void split to pieces in the realm of the heart. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Powerful write...much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~ Is that love I see in your eyes... |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh, this is different for you..hmm.. i see gates being open and stone walls crumbled as a "good" thing, though you are left vulnerable, ...i like this little piece... has me thinking..  ~Dawn |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
oh, this is different for you..hmm.. i see gates being open and stone walls crumbled as a "good" thing, though you are left vulnerable, ...i like this little piece... has me thinking.. ~Dawn Well, I felt inspired by your very thoughtful and evocative comments re: variations in writing...This poem is a response to your inspiration...yes, vulnerable, yes, stone walls crumbling a very good thing....  ~Paul |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Powerful write...much enjoyed. Hugs~ Aww, thank you ... ~P |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
darkness pierced... void split to pieces in the realm of the heart. beyond the darkness beyond the silence beyond the abyss darkpoet huh?lol but can we ever go back to milky wisps of clouds and daisies?? |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
darkpoet huh?lol but can we ever go back to milky wisps of clouds and daisies?? when the crocus bursts through the thawed earth, moist and fertile brimming full with winter's melt... swollen blossoms will greet the sun eyes squinting to a smile... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
when the crocus bursts through the thawed earth, moist and fertile brimming full with winter's melt... swollen blossoms will greet the sun eyes squinting to a smile... along with you i await the first popping heads thru flower beds |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Paul, I've always seen the opening of gates as a beautiful thing too, as it can feel heartbreaking like a puppy looking out an iron-barred pound window looking behind the gates and wanting to run free and barefoot on the land around! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
along with you i await the first popping heads thru flower beds ~~~~~<@>~~~~~~ flower beds, blanketed in soft snow as time passes. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
I've always seen the opening of gates as a beautiful thing too, as it can feel heartbreaking like a puppy looking out an iron-barred pound window looking behind the gates and wanting to run free and barefoot on the land around! Noah, thank you for sharing, you are so wonderfully and delightfully expressive....~P |
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