Open Poetry #31 |
Forbidden |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Forbidden You are forbidden to me, now. This tickle in my throat, a reminder how something so good, can taste bitter and leave me with an irritation that constantly needs clearing. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
That's it exactly. *S* I know the feeling well... just didn't know how to describe it. *S* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
ahem * cough cough * thanks, M |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh yes...spit it out and flush it down the toilet!!! "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
'vicks cough drops' could be advised... but there is a further depth to this which can't be masked by 'cough drops and the like'... nice write... regards sudhir |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Wonderful write. I think you reminded us all of something similar which too had happened to us. Sometimes if the heart cannot let go, then the mind has to forbid it. I don't know the mechanics of it but its true!! ^*Kimberley*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Little Mo you’ve hit the nail on the head, you have such an ability to write, and this is perfect. Only you could describe it just like this, and its so accurate. You know I love this don’t you? as always Mushy Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awww Maureen, I do hope you feel better, soon. |
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