Open Poetry #31 |
Smile |
choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Your inviting smile, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
choshi A delight to read. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful, happy and passionate |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~smiles~ and eyes can say so much *s M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And how I yearn to see certain smiling eyes. *S* I like this very much, choshi... well written! *S* |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
What a lovely read. Wonderful little poem!! ^*Kimberley*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How lovely! Very much enjoyed this little gem. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh, so good when you are around... always miss you in the absence smiling, is a wonderful way of breaking ice, storms, and hiatus!! beautiful, Paul, very "you"! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Choshi...for several friends, I will send this to them. Thank you for such a lovely poem. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ummmmmm -- nice, Choshi! ......jo |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I love the flow of this, Paul. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you everyone, I have been so slow to respond as I was dwon with a fever .... Your comments are so kind and inspiring... ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
oh, so good when you are around... always miss you in the absence smiling, is a wonderful way of breaking ice, storms, and hiatus!! beautiful, Paul, very "you"! Thank you Dawn, I missed very much being around.... |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Scorpio: "I love the flow of this, Paul. Well done." Thank you so much, and I see you are quite the hand with Tanka... ~P |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Smiles are nice...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
One more time!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Smiles are nice...James U bet... |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
One more time!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! Awww, you are sweet Nancy, Thank you ~P |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Wonderful rhythm, and a warm smile to go with it. Doesn't get much better~ Much enjoyed choshi~ |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Doesn't get much better~ Much enjoyed choshi~ Thank you Blue, ~P |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a lovely tribute |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
a lovely tribute Thank you Dixie...... ~P |
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