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Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-03-02 04:34 PM

tread worn

if you can't find me
scrape your shoe
along the pavement

©Snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2004-03-02 04:39 PM

ouch! now that is feeling low....

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2004-03-03 01:36 AM

yep sure is. thanks for the comment.

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

3 posted 2004-03-03 08:44 PM

wow, cant get any clearer than this...

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2004-03-04 12:21 PM

You do the nitty gritty so good!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-03-04 12:35 PM

Harsh reality -- hope it's not as bad as all that -- but I sure have experienced this feeling a time or too myself. You are so good at saying things succinctly!

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

6 posted 2004-03-05 08:56 AM

Hello Snow. Ouch! Need I say anymore?

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

7 posted 2004-03-05 08:59 AM

After reading your poetry for a while now, it seems certainly clear to me that you do not belong beneath anyones shoe.
Hope things are OK Snow, You are a true gem.

Cheer up chicken

^*~Kimberley~*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-03-05 12:02 PM

dang

that's a good write

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

9 posted 2004-03-05 12:06 PM

Powerfully Painfull...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

10 posted 2004-03-05 01:23 PM

OUCH !!!

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

11 posted 2004-03-07 10:12 PM

ohhh no ... not that low snow ..your up in the clouds like an angel : ) great poem , i feel that way at least once a week lol

James

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