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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-03-02 04:34 PM



tread worn

if you can't find me
scrape your shoe
along the pavement

©Snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

© Copyright 2004 Snow - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-03-02 04:39 PM


ouch! now that is feeling low....


Snow
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2 posted 2004-03-03 01:36 AM


yep sure is. thanks for the comment.

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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3 posted 2004-03-03 08:44 PM


wow, cant get any clearer than this...

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2004-03-04 12:21 PM


You do the nitty gritty so good!




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5 posted 2004-03-04 12:35 PM


Harsh reality -- hope it's not as bad as all that -- but I sure have experienced this feeling a time or too myself.  You are so good at saying things succinctly!
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6 posted 2004-03-05 08:56 AM


Hello Snow. Ouch! Need I say anymore?

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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7 posted 2004-03-05 08:59 AM


After reading your poetry for a while now, it seems certainly clear to me that you do not belong beneath anyones shoe.
Hope things are OK Snow, You are a true gem.  
Cheer up chicken

^*~Kimberley~*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

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displaced
8 posted 2004-03-05 12:02 PM


dang

that's a good write

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9 posted 2004-03-05 12:06 PM


Powerfully Painfull...

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just out of reach
10 posted 2004-03-05 01:23 PM


OUCH !!!

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11 posted 2004-03-07 10:12 PM


ohhh no ... not that low snow ..your up in the clouds like an angel : ) great poem , i feel that way at least once a week lol

James

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