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For The Time Being
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For The Time Being |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Well... I think you all are right, this poem needed to be changed. Here it is. ~For The Time Being~ The womb is a global sky and though we exist in the exits of life we are nurtured forever from hallowed breasts. ©2004 Grover Gall |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Eloquently expressed, Grover. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Thanks Scorpio. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Enjoyed the thought behind this, Grover. Thank you. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A beautiful thought well expressed! Love, Margherita |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Such wonderful imagery and symbolism fills your words, sweet friend, yay, God Bless You, poetry nurtures our hearts too and yours brought one big smile my way, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Grover, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Ahh... Very nice. well and beautifully expressed. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Really good, Grover! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
interesting and well written - thanks Paul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Grover. Hugs~
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Grover Clarity is hard to acomplish when brevity is the choice of form...you have done this in this short poem, your message is clear... nice work ________ice ><> |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yanno Grover?...It's sad that a great poem like this brings such deplorable thoughts to me as soon as I read the first line....the first thing that came to my mind was a tampax being a billowy cloud...I need therapy!.....This is a great write pal... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
amazing! |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Grover, This is a great write. Keep up the good work. ~Laura~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Enjoyed this very much Grover. Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Interesting... and it had a lovely simpleness about it. -JUju |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
short and powerful...nice write...got me thinking |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Nice work on this one, short but sweet. I really enjoyed it. ^*Kimberley*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Well done Grover .... so few words , yet expressing so much Hope |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Oh, wise one. I humbly bow! Excellent! Excellent. This is one I'll be able to remember without a cheat sheet! (Incidently, thanks for your quandaries at my post. You were right-it needed wome type of clarification.) Sadelite |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh! I like this! |
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