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Kazeru
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0 posted 2004-03-01 03:33 PM



-Dedicated to Daphne Groenland-

Sweeter then a poet's dream
You are to me
None can believe the beauty
I see in you
Because no one will ever see
You the way I do
Such tender gentleness
You're lovingly kind ways
My elvish maiden
of ancient lore
You conjure a smile on my face
Whenever I feel sad
Alike the angels up in heaven
You give me comfort
A warmth, a feeling of love
And for all of this
I thank you
And offer you my heart


->Be thy angels? Nay We are just men!<-

© Copyright 2004 Jean-Phillippe Wijnholds - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2004-03-01 05:50 PM


Lovely...James
Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-03-06 11:57 PM


how beautiful
Grover
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3 posted 2004-03-22 01:03 PM


Thanks for the good write!
green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2004-03-23 10:44 AM


this is a good write.  And pleasant to read.

GIS

[I appreciate your concern, you'll always stink and burn.]-Kurt Cobain

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