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Open Poetry #31

by the kitchen door

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2004-03-01 01:22 AM

                 by the kitchen door

                 yes, that's it . . . a wrinkled smile
                 or so I keep telling myself
                 when I get caught in that mirror

                 but winter will be too long one time
                 and I shall miss the freshness of tender new peas

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-03-01 01:38 AM

Oh, this was special -- I like your point of view!

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

2 posted 2004-03-01 01:47 AM

Krawdad, I like how you captured that thought at that moment. Enjoyed this. ~K~

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2004-03-01 02:11 AM

my heart
is spring
and never
shall there
be a
long winter
for you

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-03-01 04:08 AM

and I closed my eyes
and saw you standing there
by the kitchen door

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2004-03-01 06:09 PM

Well this shot me back to packing times...
and wonderful gardens giving up
their very best...

and the rush to capture a moment's
flavor...

yep...

a

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-03-01 06:41 PM

you
still here
leaning gently
against the cupboard doors
soon....very soon
winter will be
quickly
forgotten.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2004-03-01 09:41 PM

Krawdad

I know that mirror and the hope outside the door.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2004-03-02 01:41 PM

yes.... enjoyed this and the thoughts as well as the images it brought to mind..
I may not like the winter too long..but we will all indeed find one..

nice work sir...

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