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heart-fenced gardens
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heart-fenced gardens |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
when floods of emotion o’erflow my wearied heart, when cold-steel strength gives way to sentient dreams and tears of public solitude course down the streams of cascaded aqueducts fixed like facades that start the windowed glaze of soul’s decided daze to grow into rivulets of sentiment strained through eyes of fear that keeps the tortured silent soul in check so near and bids the joy of cleansing rain to freely flow that feeds the pangs of aspiration to fully express the spirit’s need for physical release in waves of desire surfing like sea stones in rhythmic oceanic attire and waking the psyche to realms of calm redress I flee to the core of heart-fenced gardens of fascination free And feel the warmth that comes from within the very me of me. |
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LiquidMidnight Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 50 |
And this is why I love sonnets; there's just something about them that brings out the eloquence of the writer. This write was enjoyed very much. I don't know why I'm the only one to comment on this so far. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Steavenr -- what a magnificent piece of writing -- absolutely superb in my book of verse! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
And what a beautiful garden it is, Steaver. I love these images: "the windowed glaze of soul’s decided daze to grow into rivulets of sentiment strained through eyes of fear that keeps the tortured silent soul in check so near and bids the joy of cleansing rain to freely flow" I love the whole poem, over and over. And saving it in my library. ~K~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you have an amazing way of wirting |
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