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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-02-29 08:36 PM

The world slows but the shadow of Heron, blended into amethyst sky
My heartbeat rests within the throes of grace, upon the stilling sigh
Like spring each nerve unwinding…shedding tension into sandy ridge
The Lake remarks, withdrawn the touch of shore its frosted fridge
Ah, but sun so warm pours forth upon the sanity of change
Forest coveting the last of snows to drink in spells so strange
That promise the awakening of all intention just created
Old and new seem one to stretch and yawn anticipated
Look up, for there begins the real story weeping into view
The wing beat and the call announce a time of something new
The oldest souls stir now in vehemence and verve
Spread out to harbor song and soothe of every jangled nerve
The world slows up so peacefully a different drum beats clear
And welcomed into this enchanted time, we are included here

Copyright Kkh 2/29/04

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (03-02-2004 04:20 PM).]

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2004-02-29 08:57 PM

Look up, for there begins the real story weeping into view
The wing beat and the call announce a time of something new

yes, there is something in the air the last few mornings, i could sense it too , loud and clear
o, don't worry, im not going anywhere, (read your comments on my sea poem...just pondering
when that big day comes ,thanks

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-02-29 09:53 PM

I remember Michigan...
and I remember moments just like this...
you have a gift.

Use it...
to share with the world
your charms.

Magnificent!

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-02-29 09:56 PM

Real talent, very good work! Grover.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2004-02-29 10:04 PM

See, I told ya!! Ya gots duh stuffs!!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2004-02-29 11:39 PM

lovely feel to this, vivid visions throughout...in the 2nd line, though, I think you want "throes" instead of "throws"

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-03-01 04:18 AM

beautiful

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