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Open Poetry #31

Daylight Utopia

Iron Wolf
Junior Member

since 2004-01-20

Posts 23

0 posted 2004-01-27 01:13 PM

Crisp, cool evening
The cricket orchestra
Plays on in the background
While the sun sinks and melts into
The sculpted sky.
The birds of yester-light
Sing the last song of the day
The trees sigh with relief,
Relax,
And flop about in the
Dying Breeze.
The daylight utopia
Gives way to the darkness
Lets him take charge
While she rests.
Animals of sorts
Creep out and investigate the night,
Bask in the growing darkness
And greet the night with
A cheerful disposition.

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2004-01-27 01:25 PM

So pretty....I love nature....

~sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2004-01-27 03:25 PM

Truly a lovely landscape seen through the eyes of a true poet...well done

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2004-01-27 10:59 PM

Nice writing...James

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2004-01-27 11:03 PM

This is delightful. Joyce

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2004-01-27 11:53 PM

(smiles) Yay! (does happy sunshine dance) This is sooooooo beautifully painted, sweet friend, you make the sun blush with your wonderful imagery, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank yu for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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