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KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2004-02-29 02:14 AM

If time be lessons
in the dark
And we are left without a spark

I think had I had
That single chance
I would have left this endless dance.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2004-02-29 08:46 AM

I've felt this way before... and Clarence doesn't magically appear to show me how my life's made a difference... I just have to hope that it has. *S*

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2004-02-29 01:20 PM

What a beautiful flow of words.
Great write!

Eric

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-02-29 01:58 PM

me too

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-02-29 02:01 PM

I know...I have felt this was also.
So much said in so few words..well done!
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2004-02-29 02:15 PM

This is short, but beautifully full of meaning and image. Very nice.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-03-01 01:59 AM

Exactly -- you said it all very well. I'm chalking up this mood I'm in to it being the Ides of March and hoping it will pass like the rain we're having here today. Great write!

dingusjr
Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

7 posted 2004-03-01 05:26 AM

Keep 'em coming, Lauren...enjoyed!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2004-03-01 06:33 AM

Very good, KoKo...
a lot said
in so few words.

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

9 posted 2004-03-01 10:54 PM

Thank you everyone. I'm scared to say my muse is back, for fear of jinxing myself...but I think.....

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2004-03-02 02:08 PM

LOL...it's back all right.
Do it again!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2004-03-02 02:15 PM

awww walking away from the endless dance, not easy to do....well done KoKo~

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

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