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weariness |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
weariness weighs; weakness frays lives while days grow bleak |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Steaven...I like this style. You achieve much with few words. Hugs~
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Exactly that! *S* |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The ending of winter...or anything in life seems so much like this... Thankfully spring rejoices! Wonderfully said Steaven. TD |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very good work. Enjoyed much! Grover. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh, how well i know this "weariness" youve written it well  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This one is dismal. That's the word I was looking for. Dismal. It made me feel gray inside-so you did a good job. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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