Open Poetry #31 |
More or Less? |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
More or Less? lately things have put me to the test I want much more for I’ve had less |
||
© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved | |||
sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Ahh sweet lady I know exactly what you mean. Been there myself and for me I have come to realize I will always have less... as long as I continue to settle for it. But no more, I will hold out for the best from now on... |
||
aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
another one of your short and sweet poems a hard art to master , i like the way you describe your feelings , slick : ) |
||
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
My toe is tapping in time with yours, ladyslick. |
||
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
simple and i like the beat |
||
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
1slick_lady, thank you for sharing this today, enjoyed, short with thought. We all want more, for we've had less We want the life that God did bless But some things are just meant to be As wanting more's our legacy Sincerely Rick |
||
iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
And, Helen, you deserve more! I like your word play. Hope you're doing okay. ....jo |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |