Open Poetry #31 |
Such Sweet Silence |
Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Such Sweet Silence There's such sweet silence in the night In the dark, the world's asleep With pen in hand these poems I write But there are few that I will keep Like softly dripping rain they fall At other times more like a drought At this late hour the birds still call In trees far off they move about In silence there is often sound So listen close and you may hear Much like a whisper, it is faint But it is always very clear These Mockingbirds, oh how they sing Nine songs I counted once when late I check the clock, it's almost time It's for the veil of dark they wait From silence do I draw these words To speak of dreams, to find a phrase To share the truth and let you know That we're alike in many ways So much alike if it be known The wars would stop and peace ensue The children of the earth be fed There's so much good that we could do We all search life for loveliness Our dear ones treasured 'til the end We all remember our first kiss And broken hearts that had to mend We're warmed by laughter of a child In awe when sunsets paint the skies While kissing, often lose ourselves And love to see smiles reach the eyes Small whispers in the night that speak From silence grown and darkness bred Of paths to trod and beauty seek To pen the words that must be said When petals spread to welcome light And flowers breathe perfume to air This quiet friend that is the night Is now at rest without a care Sleep on, dear silence, 'til the day Breathtaking, paints the sky to red So stars once more can find their way There are still words I have not said (this is who I am and am struggling still to be. There is still poery in my heart, paintings yet to be revealed, but I can barely think and breathe now. Of all the poetry I was once able to write, I think this poem is one that reveals the true soul of me. I'm a good person. Like each of us, I make mistakes, but my very soul is very pute and caring, loving, in awe of the world around me, in awe of friends that understand how much I care, just how much I love them. God blesses us in BIG ways. He's blessed me when I never felt I deserved it. He loves me. I love all!!!! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this IS beautiful |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Michael, you are a true and great man thank you for this powerful piece, for sharing yourself |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Michael I am so glad that you have come and left this gift for us all, you have been missed dear man. Peace sweetie, |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Sleep on, dear silence, 'til the day Breathtaking, paints the sky to red So stars once more can find their way There are still words I have not said" I was about to log off and head to work when I saw your name pop up here in front of me, and could not resist opening and responding before I headed out. It is soooooooo good to read you again, Michael. This is absolutely wonderful. Beautiful thoughts to ponder and reflect upon. I'm so glad to see this here this morning, my friend, and very much enjoyed the read. Just lovely! Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Auguste, this is a wonderful touching piece. The night carries its gifts and you capture the whispers, sharing them beautifully. I breathe in your beauty. Thank you! Love, Margherita |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
What a wonderful poem! I share many of these same feelings. I certainly understand about feeling unworthy but am trying to see myself as I believe God sees us all... He sees only the good in us and is always waiting to grant His blessings, if only we would ask... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So good to see you here Michael. We have missed you. Understand the difficulties you are facing, and hold your hand in the smile of your works and the memories we cherish. TD |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Auguste, poetry is the music of our soul that we leave behind so that all might know we once cared...not just for ourselves, but for all mankind... Your gifts are still many, and still remain with you. I am sure, very sure, you will continue to always give, as good as you get. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Auguste What more can one ask. Well done |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Michael! What a wonderful surprise to wake to one of your writes! Your words are lovely and as pure as your heart. God Bless You my friend. ~Healing hugs and love, Nancy~
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
what a pleasure to read this touching write...so very good to see you here....I continue to keep you in prayers and thoughts...gentle hugsss Lauren~ ~~**~~ There are moments when speech is but a mouth pressed lightly and humbly against the angel's hands. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Michael sweet, gentle, man, Your poem is the first that I have read to-day, and it is all I need to make this Thursday complete. Beautiful, wise words. Who needs more? Take heart my friend. I wrap warm thoughts around you. Hugs, Chris |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
When I saw that you had written a poem, I clicked on it faster than you can say, "Hallelujah!" Michael, I am in awe of your talent ~ and you! In spite of all your trials and tribulations, you are able to create a remarkable piece of poetry that is so full of beauty, gratitude, and wisdom. This was a real treat for me to read ~ and experience! You had me from start to finish. ...and may I add that your comments only added to my appreciation of both you and your fine poetry! God bless you, sweet Michael. Loving, healing hugs, Linda |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Michael How wonderful to find this special poem here this morning...it has always been one of my favorites of yours. I'm thinking of you as always, with love! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Your paintbrush is still very full, Michael, and that quill still holds an ink that yields a unique write from your heart. It is a pleasure to read your words again. Healing thoughts from my heart to yours, Kacy. (PS, I am once again under the northern lights) |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Michael, you know how I love this one. Good to see it here today. ~K~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Oh Michael, I literally flood in tears reading this most perfect poem that repesents YOU, dearest friend, I have been so blessed to have you as my dear friend in my heart and I always will be, for your golden heart shows such strength and love that is seldom found in this world and you are a wonderful example of faith for all those who struggle and fight in life! (sigh) You may feel weak curently, but your heart has only grown stronger and I hope you always believe that as you influence and inspire all of us greatly, God Bless You Forever, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
good morning, Michael |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Michael...the biggest of hugs from me to you~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was one of Michael's best when he was at his worst. It is a honest picture of a man that could see the best in everything even through his pain and suffering. What I remember most about him was his "protection and empathy of the ladies" always the gentleman. Well here's to Michael, may he soar high and God bless him. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is one of my favorite's of Michael's as well. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very well said Sharon.. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Something special this way came and it is with fond memory and regard that I come to visit a good friend of poetry, and time, and for the love of write. |
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