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Ocean Of Regret |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Ocean Of Regret ~*Marge Tindal*~ In the raging waters of regret ~You are the tear that I haven’t cried yet~ For in the wave of memories recall I deny the tide of you upon my shore ~*~ Just a – Passing Outcry Emoted Moment ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...dare I say, very deep? Marge, as I know of you, I know only parts of you. For as much as we have shared, I only know that this is one of your best.  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...one of your best for sure, Marge, really ejoyed the read. jwesley |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is really good Marge but of course they all are! Love ya, Betty |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Very impressive! I suppose most of us have a regret or two like this one. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
looks like this will be my second favourite of yours! powerful words Marge |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
....in awe |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Very good Marge. I've been there with regrets too. Felt like I was going to drown, but I didn't. Deb |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Margie gal this is so moving and beautiful. Heart hugs!  |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
wow...the short form makes this even more powerful...wow! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mizz Marge, you're awesome! P ~ poetic O ~ omnicient (with a small "o" ~ The capital "O" is reserved for God  )E ~ eloquent M ~ masterful You really packed a punch with this one! ~ actually, all your poems knock me out!  Love & Light, EO |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
YIKES!!! And then some. I have read this several times this morning and keep coming back to it. A COLOSSAL yet words of few poem from you dear lady. huggles of luv, Marti |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!!! Eric |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
An over-flow of emotional poetic wonder. One of your very best lady..  .. Keep that pen to paper and fill us with your visual imagery of soul. Love and peace, Maggie ((~.~)) |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...understanding this.  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the depths of the sea even in a drop of rain |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very deeply felt and expressed...good one marge |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sweetly penned, very meaningful. |
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