Open Poetry #31 |
Sorrow I cause you |
Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Sorrow I caused you ... You face is now so sad and your smile is brief. You speak in a sad voice and you say so little. I loved those things I lost and it is all my fault. Juju |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A great poem, Juju! Grover. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've always been on the receiving end... from ones with no apologies. *S* I like this very much. *S* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
short and direct. well done. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I usual was in the recieving end, until I relized that by leaving him alone, I was hurting him, and I think now he wont hurt me.Its really hard because he is such a nice guy! Smiles. Juju |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I know both sides of this one Juju Thanks for this It's nice to see your feelings appear before you, out of the blue Richy |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
to believe that what we think of ourselves, will trickle into all our relationships...including our one with the world...should signify the great importance of trying to understand and make things right...and when we accomplish that within ourselves, then it filters around everyone else. Your awareness is most good and evident, thanks for a very insightful read |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you leej and Richy! -Juju- |
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