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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Speak The silhouette of where you stood remarks the sable fall of shadow Trembling in my mind the fairest promise light can borrow Keeping to myself, in solitary currents shimmered daybreak swell Lingering in moments where I was so safe and played so well Speak The passages that curve along the outskirts of a daydreams wish Threaded through my fingers and caressed within a moments bliss Quiet in the suns sweet bathe my soul submerged at rest Discussions that we share within my heart beat small at best Speak An imprint of you glows upon my side in cheery disposition The laughter that we shared sounds on the turn of inquisition So silent, in the theory said of time and all it’s tame Held captive in the sunset as the moon calls out your name Copyright Kkh 2/25/04 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just lovely, Kathleen hugss M |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
I really enjoyed reading this! Grover. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kathleen, if I can to say one thing about your writing, it would be this: You are consistently eloquent and elegant. So if you ever publish? I want the chance to say just that.   |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Kathleen..this poem was just perfectly rymed and the style and flow of the words just excellent.... This sort of work deserves much credit and i give it to you....for you have earned it... Thank you for the words... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
One word comes to mind... Superb! Deb |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Depth and beauty...wonderful write! Eric |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
So silent, in the theory said of time and all it’s tame Held captive in the sunset as the moon calls out your name love how you brought it all home with this wonderful closing |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is extremely eloquent and captivating. Again your muse has blessed us. Thank you. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
OOOOhhhhh, this one is wonderful!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite Kathleen...so much enjoyed. Hugs, Nancy~
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