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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2004-02-25 04:16 AM

SUN, THE KNIGHT OF THE DAY

Knight of the day still ablaze in the west
Putting your shiny steel gauntlet to rest
Late is the hour to brandish a shield
That mirrors your tangerine glow on the field

You cannot challenge the opal white moon
Not to rise in your place that her face will consume
So lovely her countenance, bathed in your light
Behind a white veil made of mist of the night

And she will awaken you just before dawn
When indigo shadows are stretched on the lawn
Do not e’er seduce such a princess as she
For your power is great but much weaker than He

Remember your place in the great Milky Way
That God is the King of the knight and the day

Elizabeth Santos
Feb 3, 2004

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

1 posted 2004-02-25 05:26 AM

Dear Liz, this is just beautiful, I enjoyed every word of it, thank you so much for sharing your talent, very much appreciated.

Sincerely
Rick

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

2 posted 2004-02-25 05:47 AM

May i say that this poem was just great....love the imagery....

Thank you for your words ES....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-02-25 04:57 PM

Elizabeth, you have to quit posting so EARLY in the morning...

Back to the top with you!

(You knew this elephant would love this poem!)

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

4 posted 2004-02-27 01:06 AM

I LOVE this!
So true, and I love the imagery

Definitely great.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-02-27 02:51 PM

Liz this was indeed poetry in motion, beautiful prose...it just seemed to roll of the tongue with the most sacred of images...simply lovely

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

6 posted 2004-02-28 11:00 PM

Can I just sneak in to say
God is King over this knight.

my best to you liz

as always, lucky

Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2004-02-29 12:12 PM

Liz...it is you that is beautiful, and your words just a reflection of that.

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