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RIVER WALK
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RIVER WALK |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Walking beside the river in the early morning Watching newborn sunlight dance off ripples like fireworks in the night The water is like many diamonds sparkling Trees sway in the wind, fighting to stay upright. The ripples crash gently against the riverbank Like miniture waves from the sea The water is so clear and hypnotizing As it creeps by so majestically. The wind and trees create a harmonic melody Birds sing and swing to the tone Bushes & butterflies dance vigorously in the breeze While dragonflies and bees buzz on. Creeping thru the thick underbrush Trekking along the river path Kicking off the glistening dew drops That hang like pearls from the grass. Garfield |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful scenery you've painted here |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You remind me why I seek water whenever possible. *S* I like this! *S* |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
How beautiful this is!! I could almost see the picture.  Hugs  Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
ggrn3 -- this was really a beautiful walk -- it was so well done that I felt I was right there with you -- it left me wanting more, it was so good. |
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