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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2004-02-24 11:46 AM

There are layers to this
uncertainty.

And truth belongs to
empty moments.

We begin here.

Certain only of the ache of
our caress.

The layers fall.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-02-24 11:50 AM

Very good-- use of word economy, well-written! Grover.

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2004-02-24 12:02 PM

this one is a genuine keeper...hate to pull only one line out of a real gem, but this line blew me away:

"And truth belongs to
empty moments"

my only disappointment was that I didn't have the privilege of writing it myself

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2004-02-24 12:02 PM

Your beautiful poem unfolds like an opening lotus blossom...

Love & Light,
EA

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-02-24 12:03 PM

IWIHWT Eric!!
Fantastic write..much enjoyed.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

5 posted 2004-02-24 07:38 PM

Beautiful... the layers fall as soft as petals of roses, revealing the truest beauty.

Wonderful, magical poem.

Thank you for sharing this...

I love you,

Moca

EternitysHorizon
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 145
Twilight's Orchestra

6 posted 2004-02-24 08:42 PM

truth is so often found in those empty moments

enjoyed, sparse, minamilsts are applauding

Where rainbow touches earth
place your foot upon the light illuminating forever- EternitysHorizon
Often see, rarely touched
Rise if ye seek to see

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2004-02-24 11:41 PM

Ericc...You always seem to touch some aching honest part of love that I never saw or could pin point until you wrote it. Thank you for that.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-02-25 04:50 AM

I admire you

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2004-02-25 01:29 PM

You know the way, the gestures, the words to make those layers fall... you have the magical formula.

And you reveal just enough to make us want "to begin here" ...

So beautiful!
I love you.
Margherita

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2004-02-25 05:19 PM

Beautiful Eric.
TD

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2004-02-25 05:44 PM

We begin here.

Certain only of the ache of
our caress.
love the thought

*s
M

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

12 posted 2004-02-25 08:55 PM

Very sharp write. Enjoyed. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

13 posted 2004-02-26 12:11 PM

Keep peeling back those layers...see the beauty underneath!

~ARH

love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

14 posted 2004-02-26 10:37 PM

Hey Eric

I really loved this beautiful piece of writing.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

15 posted 2004-02-26 10:40 PM

Your poem was very creative and read very smoothly(:"

Juju

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