Open Poetry #31 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
M I carry this pain, one of never forgetting. Divides my body in halves, a good side and a bad one. It strikes my moods and washes away the tears needed to free me from you. Heating the pain doesn't seem to ease the pressure, as the stabbings are sharper come each morning. If the sun didn't rise, I would live in darkened corners. Be fed by the kisses of yesterday, and seek the warmth of my own arms. Today is a bleak one, chances of this and that, but no definites... as is my life. I can feel the heat, and can move to my right, but the other side of me is in spasm. Too much aloneness and I am becoming too much to handle on my own. M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-24-2004 10:40 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such an ache is haerd to bear Maureen.. Sending knowing hugs your way. Excellent write pretty lady~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
You know... (this is where I act like I know everything) it sounds to me like you are taking on far too much and do not have a release... You are not super woman...none of us are. Seek out the companionship of someone outside of the circumstances and take the time you need for yourself. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
If the sun didn't rise, I would live in darkened corners. this is powerful, this is grief of the heart, however the person left, it still hurts beyond sunrise and sunset...I am like you, waiting for the time when it is supposed to get better.... hugs dear lady...I feel your pain all too well |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this not only significantly hits home, but also is a very deeply felt write. Well done |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
As always Maureen a wonderful write but so dark and sad. If this is about you, I am sorry you feel such darkness in your heart and soul. Sending a big hug ... luvs, Marti I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow....deeply moving. Eric |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you, just suffering with some constant back pain...probably from all the shoveling, and chopping of ice and loading up on fire wood..all of which I was/am not use to. soft hugs M |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"Too much aloneness and I am becoming too much to handle on my own." your body may weaken, but i know you have a strong will... and i enjoyed reading this |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A very nice poem Maureen...if a little sad....hope your back is better soon.... thank you for the words... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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