Open Poetry #31 |
Dagger's Thrust |
WildPoet Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 205California |
A dagger thrust at my own heart I hold my head up even higher Flying through air and floating on seas I sell myself to the death buyer WildPoet |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Smile. I read this just yesterday, and thought that it read as a riddle, and I confess, I couldn't have ventured a guess just yesterday. But today? I relate to every word completely. "I hold my head up even higher" I love your spirit m'friend, and thank you for this. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A dagger? Nay sounds more like cupids arrow! A lot of power packed in this little poem. You're scaring me - it was only a couple of months ago that you said 'I can't write poetry'! |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
i like that this can go a couple of ways for me.. very nice write! snow "...why does my skeleton pursue me |
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