Open Poetry #31 |
Tonight’s Showing |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Curve of light hangs low Venus quivers in its glow Eyes raised in stardust |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How lovely this is Karilea!! A keeper for my library. ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
could not resist- One Acrostic coming thy way Heavens glowing life powder Abiding gift Earthbound we long so for Ere any TearDrop's so fine melody fuel Veer off vaporize untouching losing Even a sacred touch dry anointing Never a chance so gather thy joy In copious handfulls dancing in the dry rain Soaked in efferscent glow to life absorb Handful after bushel bathe in starlights kiss Every touch magnifying the same beyond any Reading one could distantly untouchingly EverGlow stardust the light doth bring Not the most pleasant job around. But the PIP-Gods make me serve my penance. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
absolutely you were right...*w* adore this one. |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
well since so few have responded I offer you an addendum Blinking intagible unknowable swirlng cosmic light patterns blinding moment vision opened eyes to See Just a thought Sunshine toss it emboss it more likely embark thyself pon to sighting self true thee Now the pip bosses must admit they get their money's worth here poem on poem on poem and often once again no complaints here I am unlocked (at least somewhat from Death- that is a pleasant relief) b Where rainbow touches earth gentlest |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Nice write....thank you for the words... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Karilea~ you do these with such heavenly grace, as always beautiful! ~~**~~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I saw that scene the other night. It was very beautiful just like this write, Karilea. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice... |
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