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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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dead dice i grabbed the table edge shaking loose dreams that fell from the fractured facade i blew into my palm lily scented wishes and held my breath while i set them free i stood grounded in my belief that love was for fools and i was no longer a fool till the tips of my fingers released hope dressed in dice and they landed with a t h u d against the walls of my heart and i with my mouth open wide said nothing about the night dice died. ©snow'04 "yet each man kills the thing he loves |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
As usual, excellent! Grover. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Terrific, my friend...great write. jwesley |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
sorry that I missed this earlier...missed this: "i stood grounded in my belief that love was for fools and i was no longer a fool" and that would have been a shame...great write |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very well written snow...interesting... Thanks... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
ahhhhh ... makes me want to read it again , i sometimes get lost in your words , there seem to be many secrets hidden benieth the snow JW : ) lata |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
WOW! Of all the things to gamble on... what an analogy. I am deeply impressed... and for the life of me, I heard the T H U D. |
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